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    An Explanation of my "Wings of Darkness" Fanfic + An Old Poem

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    DarkZX
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    An Explanation of my "Wings of Darkness" Fanfic + An Old Poem

    Post by DarkZX on Thu Nov 24, 2011 7:17 pm

    Basically, it's an old fanfic that I made 4 or 5 years ago. I was wondering if I should rewrite it to keep it up with my modern writing style. The old one I posted is below (warning, it has fail grammar, boring language and such, but I find it nostalgic as fuck)

    Anyways, I wrote this poem when I was 15

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    I remember that day that I first met you.
    Standing in the sunlight with that dazzling hue.
    On that morning when you stood there and shined.
    I wondered softly to myself... why?
    Why a person like me, so dark and cold.
    Would develop feelings for her, bieng so bold.
    Would she even care to notice me?
    A dark individual walking down the street.
    My whole existence freezes up, just for that split second.
    When you walk past me, sparkling like you flew down from heaven.
    Maybe we could be, maybe we could not.
    Regardless of how I wished for it, it was all for naught.
    For as you brushed past me, focused on your day's list.
    I stood there, gazing at you, lost in the mist.


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    Re: An Explanation of my "Wings of Darkness" Fanfic + An Old Poem

    Post by Black_Envy on Tue Nov 29, 2011 1:44 pm

    Wings of Darkness is such shite, make something new, noone wants to read something you wrote when you were 14, you sucked. You're way better now
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    Re: An Explanation of my "Wings of Darkness" Fanfic + An Old Poem

    Post by Jex on Tue Nov 29, 2011 3:41 pm

    I agree with Envy. Neutral


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